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Alfred stared at the computer screen with a not so amused expression. It was another photo his friend Oliver had taken with his "Oh so perfect family" he had. Well, that's what the cupcake freak call's his family. He glanced at the almost mirror imagine son Oliver had. Except his son had the eyes of his mother. A disgust tone trickled from brunette's throat and closed the window. He couldn't take anymore of this cutesy shit. But somehow he was slightly envious of what Oliver had. A beautiful wife, a good home, a decent job, a smiling son.

Years ago this would make the American's head turn away and sneer at the thought, but now. Being older, he felt a bit lonely and yearned for the same kind of thing. Not that he would openly express this to anyone. Especially Oliver, he wouldn't leave him alone if he told him that.

Ring Ring

The phone broke him from his thoughts and leaned back from his chair to look at the caller ID. What a surprise. It was Oliver to give him a call.

Alfred rolled his chair over and picked up to phone. "Yeah..." Alfred asked bluntly. A few giggles were heard from the other line. "Spit it out damnit!" Alfred hissed. The giggles stop. "Watch your mouth Alfie! What did I tell you about swearing!" His lid literally flipped whenever he swore. Good times...

Alfred sighed. "So what do ya want?" the brunette asked again.

Oliver's tantrum stopped and went back into a fit of giggles. "My poppet has a little cupcake in the oven again!" He chimed excitedly. Alfred sat bemused at the situation. "A cupcake in the what? What the fuck Oliver?"

"Language!" Oliver angerily gasped on the other line. "Do I need to send the swear jar!" Oliver finished.

Alfred sighed again. Gripping the bridge of his nose. "Anwser my question.." Oliver took a moment to straighten up.

"We're having another baby!" He giggled.

Another one!?! Great another little freak to roam the earth with Oliver's DNA. That's what the world needs... A faint giggle was heard again. "You know, you should think about starting a family yourself~ Oh it would be sooo adorable~!" Oliver cooed. Alfreds face flushed, thoughts rushed through his mind of a family of his own, but quickly gave a stubborn sigh. "Yeah, yeah I know! Bye!" He hung up the phone and groaned. He gave himself a minute or two to reflect on the whole conversation. Family? Me? If only... Suddenly his face shift to the window to a bright sunny day.

'I'll go for a walk, I might just find what I'm looking for...'

---READER'S POV---

Today was like any other, Horrible...

You worked a small book shop, It had it's fair share of visitors and customers. The elderly were nice, Some parents brought their kids in to read in the kiddy corner of the store. The owner would convey of random conversation throughout the morning until your shift was over.

You worked until 1 PM, It was now 3 PM and you were now getting the daily bullying from your college campus. Class hasn't even started and they found you.

"Whatcha got there, whore!" A girl grinned menacingly and forcefully tug a important binder from you.

Your  notes for class were tucked in there!

A couple of her stuck up, kiss ass of the bully's friends held you from sturggling. The bully opened and emptied all of hard work onto the dirty ground. Her feet crushing shredding anything that was of any use to you in class. A year ago you dated a guy she liked. He ended up cheating on you on the 4th month of dating... With her. Even though she now has her man. She still gave you shit 'til this very day for stealing what was hers.

It wasn't the first time getting bullied, but you at least thought it would get easier when you started college... Only you were terribly wrong  and it was far worse then what you experienced.

After your bully finished smashing your stuff around she casually walk over to you. Kneeling done to your level. She smirked as she took out the cigarette from her mouth and dangled it a little to close to your face. "It would be ashame to mess up this pwetty face of yours _________~" She mocked. Her friend giggled evily to please her.

Suddenly, something went very wrong. A huge thud was heard and the bully's eyes immediately went white.

Her friends gasped and she toppled over, blood gushing from behind with a object sticking out of it.

A spiked baseball bat?

The Bully's minions let go of you to help her. "Well, well, well~" A voice sang deeply. You face flushed to see a  tall, tanned, brunette man walking toward all of you. He had a mocking smirk of achievement. His eyes were behind a pair of aviators.

"You almost killed her!" one of her minions  yelled at the man.

He walked forward pulling the bat out of her head. His head tilt to a angle to reveal his beaming red eyes.. "Scram..." he said more intimidating then they could imagine. Without another word, they left before they could be hurt too.

"So, getting bullied I see?" He asked with a smirk.

You eyes welled up and you launched at him. A surprised gasp took over him. His face flushed red. "Thank you! You're my hero!". His face scrunched up. "Hero?" you nod.

He looked away blushing more.

"Well, can your "Hero" get a kiss for saving your ass?" He asked still not looking at you directly. He was very cute you thought. Without a thought you went in for a small kiss on the cheek, but he turn your face to meet his lips. You turned beat red. He pulled away with a amused face.

"M-My name is __________." you stuttered, still at a loss for words.

His eyes beamed at you giving a smirk like grin.  You notice he had a missing tooth. Was he some kind of thug?

"The names Alfred" He replied pulling his bat over his shoulder.

That day the both of you found  something very unexpected for the both of you. A awesome ending to a terrible day and a new friend. As for Alfred.

He found just what he wanted. Just a little cutie he found all for himself.
A side story/sequel to my previous series.  --> fav.me/d5pvvtp I hope I didn't mess up 2p!America's personality. xD

Hope you guys enjoy this! Comments and criticism will be appreciated!

Update: What the- Why does this have so many views and favorites?

Hetalia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:

Story (c) :iconmslela92:

You (c) :iconsmug2pamericaplz:

Previous series: fav.me/d5pvvtp

Part 2: There was a part 2, but it ended up being crappy. A lot of people kind of forced me into making it and when it was made. No one liked it. Okay, a few day did, but the majority kept saying they were confused by it and didn't like it. So I took it down. If you really want a part 2 so badly, then make up your own conclusion. I'm sorry. I really am. I'm writing this here just in case someone might ask for a part 2 or ask why I took it down. 
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:iconbonniegirl832:
BonnieGIRL832 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New Deviant
Isn't 2p America Allen
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Blu3eyewolf Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Soooo CUTE!!Panda - Running GIMPed Dansu plz 
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PokePrincess93 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
May I ask if this is going to be a series or just a one shot?
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student General Artist
Just a one-shot
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PokePrincess93 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah okay thanks for answering
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angellife2 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015
Nice story but... His names Allen and 1pAmerica is Alfred
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Student General Artist
Can work either way, Since 2p!America isn't "official", therefore Alfred or Allen is okay to use. :)
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ZPupG1rl19 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  Student General Artist
This is a fact that confuses me...wouldn't using Allen help clarify, even if the two aren't in the story together? (not to subtract from the story or anything, it just seems like a detail my mind missed or something)
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Student General Artist
Yeah that makes sense. Well when I make the decision to rewritten most of my stories. I'll switch to the proper names to not confuse anyone.
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ZPupG1rl19 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2015  Student General Artist
That would be much appreciated. Llama Emoji-60 (Snug or Hug) [V3] 
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Whybot221 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
cute
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Hetalianprincess12 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015
"You almost killed her!" One of her minions yelled at the man.
"You almost killed her!"
"Almost"
Well maybe she died from blood loss because they just left her there...
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FlutterDash134 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student Writer
lol 
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Hetalianprincess12 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
People these days *sighs*
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Storymakerdressuper Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
So cute! la in love 
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CleverMessenger Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh Al, where were you in gradeschool
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FireDerpDucky Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015
I know, right?
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CleverMessenger Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
It's a good thing Highschool exists 
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FireDerpDucky Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015
Mhmmmmmmmmmm
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Chrissytude Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
I actually liked the part 2 but I understand
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CuppyCakessss Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student Artist
Ohonhonhonhonhon~! I got a hottie all to meh self ;D Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Wink) [V6] Twilight Sparkle HI, GIRLS. animated icon 
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madame-North Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: that was beautiful!
North: I hate to do this, but I agree with her
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Bokukokhmer Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Saved by the bat…2p!America is like the PANDA HERO!!!
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Storm-Depomiere Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Dat Icon
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Ladybugg042602 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Squeeeeeeeeeee I love AMARICA by the way happy b day AMARICA sorry ment to post this last night
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CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god! You are now my friend! Insta-watch, GO!!!
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Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
The 2p Americas name is Allen not Alfred because Alfred is the 1p guy
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novadragonheart81 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
Those people who FORCED you to make a part 2 and were ungrateful for it...
...I will come after them.
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icespark1298 Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
First thought after finishing reading: Let's get more babies than Oliver!
Second thought: Wait what?
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Prado20 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Photographer
Can you continue and lemon please
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lobospade Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Artist
aww how cute~ owo
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BrokenCupcakes Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Hawaii, being bullied by a bunch of skanks. XD
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Playstaion3 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Artist
Aww, only do it if you want to.
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Artist
Remake part two, must know what happens next!!
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student General Artist
There was never going to be a part 2 in the first place. I was kind of forced into making one and ended up being crappy. xD
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Artist
nurg..... T^T
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Norwayfan17 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014   General Artist
Well if no one liked it why didnt u just rewright it and if no one likes that one tell them to suck it, that u worked hard on it and u don't give a shit if they like it or not cause if I read it even if its confusing I wil like it enyway
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Kotetsufan Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Part 2 :"( where is it?
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student General Artist
No one liked it, therefore I took it down.
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Kotetsufan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
Aww :( but it's so good....
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Kotetsufan Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Btw adorable story ;) (ignoring Al's bloody entry... Cuz that b!tch deserved it)
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danniFphantom95 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Please put part 2 back up
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student General Artist
No one liked it. 
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danniFphantom95 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
Why I did I loved it
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sarahreader Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*squeeee8 so cute 
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KiraKatXD Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
I think you captured 2p!America's personality very well, nice job :)
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SnowFox693 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
Umm... your part 2 link doesn't work...
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Took it down. I'll remove the link sorry.
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Pikachoochoochoo Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
Why did u take it down?????
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