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You stood there glaring at your boyfriend, You were a mess from cooking dinner. He was playing that Black OPS on his Xbox 360. He has completely zoned out. He hasn't spent a single minute with you. That's all he played for 3 weeks straight. Minus the eating, short naps, potty breaks and quick showering.

You sigh giving a fake smile "Alfie come to dinner please." you offered with optimism.

He paused his game and stared at you in a zombified state. "Eh? Oh... Just bring the grub here babe!" He grinned. You frowned "No, come to the table to eat" You pouted.

"Aw come on _______! I'm on round 45!" He whined.

You couldn't take it anymore. "Alfred! Table! Now! Stop being a jerk!"You demanded. He just flinched. You stomped toward the Xbox 360 turning it off. Earning a certain yelp from Alfred. "Dude! Not cool!" He shrieked.

You didn't care at this point. You were fuming with anger. "You've been playing that game endlessly! I like video games too but this is just.... UGH!" you yell holding you head. Alfred went to touch your shoulder "_-______ I'm -". You jerk away glaring at him "I'm going to bed.." You trailed turning to the stairs. He followed shortly behind. You ran up the stairs. Darting to your bedroom, shutting the door. Before he could manage to follow you further. Fast footsteps darted your way. Stopping in front of the door. You locked the door beginning to sniffle.

"G-Go away Alfred..." you sniffled.

"But _______-!" He began "GO!" you bellowed. He stood there in pain. He didn't want to hurt you like this. What kind of hero was he is his girl wasn't happy? He left the door accepting you didn't want to see him.

As soon as he left, you flung yourself on the bed crying.

You weren't crying just because Alfred wouldn't pay attention to you, but you were also crying because you slashed out at Alfred for over something so trivial. Not before you felt yourself cry to sleep. Hoping maybe you can patch things up with Alfie once you got up.

<<<<<TIME SKIP BY THE AWESOME PRUSSIA>>>>>

Hours later you awoken from your slumber. You rubbed your tear stained face. Brushing away matted (length/color) hair that stuck to your face from crying. You swung yourself out out from the cover knowing you had to make with Alfred.

In know hurry you slammed the bedroom door open. Bolting to the stairs. You wanted to see Alfred. Make it up to him. Apologizing the way you lashed out.

Without a single blink or breath you mis-stepped going down. Your mind raced. Your were falling down the steps. Your arms trying you grab the rail in instinct to prevent serious injuries. Your grip failed as you continued stumbling down.

You finally hit the wooden floor face first. "_______!" A familiar voice shrieked  in horror. Footsteps made it to your way. You tried lifting yourself up in agony. "Al-Alfred..." you coughed as blood spewed out. "_______!! Don't move!" He pleaded. "Your hero is here!" He added swiftly picking you up without hesitation. Your mind starting to slip into the unconscious. You gave one last look at your hero before you knocked out.

<<<<<ANOTHER TIME SKIP, SPONSORED BY AWESOME PRUSSIA>>>>>

Your (color) eyes open to a blinding white room. You grumble from the sight. "________!" A familiar voice chimed. The person rushed to your side. kissing your face off. "I'm Sorry! I'm Sorry! I'm Sorry" The person kept repeating. You focused your vision to a sandy blonde haired male "Alfred?" You mumbled weakly.

He nod rapidly "Yes _______ , I'm here" he said getting teary eyes pulling you into a tight apologetic hug. Your body pained all over. You groan managing to hug back. He let go as soon as he heard the painful noises. You slowly look at yourself. You were bruised everywhere.

"A-Alfred... I'm sorry..." You sniffled.

He sat up in surprise "Dude! Don't be sorry! Your the one hurt!" he spazzed out. You giggle weakly from his goofy actions, but quickly turn to sadness. "If it wasn't for me lashing out at you for playing that game. This wouldn't of happened" You frowned. He sigh pulling you into a hug again "It's fine, I shouldn't off taken you for granted. Then mindlessly playing that game" He said snuggling his face into the gap of your neck.

You smile at the words. You pull him away a kiss him gently.

"Let's agree we're both sorry and move on.. Just be happy to have each other." You grinned

He nodded in agreement giving a loving smile. You reach out once more kissing his cheek and hugged him tenderly. "Thank you for saving me hero"

"Haha anything to keep my girl safe" He chuckled.
I actually like this one. I based this off a true story on myself falling down the stairs. Thought it make a Flufftastic reader insert lol. (except I didn't have Alfred to save me... shame lol)

Anyway! Hope you enjoy! Comment and Criticism is appreciated! (:

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Urufugaru-Wolf-Girl Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I shall never belong to him! I belong to England!
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  New Deviant  Writer
beware the biscuts 0.0
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Urufugaru-Wolf-Girl Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
why they taste good
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SomeoneFromGalifrey Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  New Deviant  Writer
*backs away slowly* 0.0
(((to be honest I cant argue with you =3 Canada and kumajiro )))
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CaitlinTrancy Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
When I was younger I would roll down the stairs for fun and it hurt like a bitch but I was stupid so I didn't give a shit.
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KorraLover10 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
SAME! Although my parents stopped me after I got a concussion...
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black-mockingjay Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Writer
I feel down stairs once, a few years ago, I was holding GLASS cups and knifes, I tripped over and passes out, When I woke up I was in my aunty's arms, covered in bandages and blood was everywhere. scary yes.

GREAT STORY THOUGH!  
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EpicCatBomb Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014   Digital Artist
Umm. Where were we injured? Falling down stairs? No.
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TheDarkLightning01 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
that sounds like something i would do... fall down the stairs...
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Candygirl263 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
I would probably be falling up the stairs...

*and lol your profile pic XD*
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lilyvirginia Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
IT'S "YOU'RE"!
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lilyvirginia Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
and "Your were falling down the steps" It's "you"
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lilyvirginia Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Your the one hurt
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student General Artist
At which point in the story does the dreaded "You're" mistake happen? Specify.
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dont-be-abandoned Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
-whispers- i warned you 'bout the stairs bro...
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student General Artist
oh god.
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KiddoKunGirl Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your icon...justLlama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3] 
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12popscotch Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
...BEAUTIFUL!!!! I FRIGGIN LOVE UR ICON AND THIS STORY!!!
Racing Girl Emoji (Lovely bye bye wave) [V3] Mable and Waddles Icon 
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nyanmeowth Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Artist
I finished readig and looked at your icon, totes ruined the momet XD
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Fairly-Fantasies Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist
Ikr? :laughing:
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KiraWolf54 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This.. ish.. awesome... xD
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Loved it
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Catalyst-Lore Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years


Sorry for the chain

AWESOME STORY!
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lilyvirginia Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Stop posting that shit
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Oh my god this...
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Shadowed-DarkNinja Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaawwwww ;0; that's so cute~! <33
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iluv2camp99 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I loved this story and your profile picture XD
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Jean-Jeano Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aawww so cute :iconyayamericaplz:
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mixedfruitwithcherry Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME JOB
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drey524 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
YAE!! The bitch got what she diserves!!! How dare she talk to Alfred like that, I mean he's like a little a cute little kid. And I know that its a reader thing meaning me that said it, but I just can't imaganing me talking to him that way.
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SolumSeronix Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...Weeeeeell, Alfred was kind of completely ignoring everything around him for a video game, sooooooo...

 Maybe he needed to be yelled at.
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
I guess
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SometimesFox Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
mister prussia sure has alot of timeskips to hand out
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mldel193 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Woah bro. You missed a copyright. For Prussia's Awesome Time Skips.
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh really? I didn't know Prussia patent that. lol
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KayleeJoan Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
:iconfuckyeahamericaplz: Got to love 'Murica! 
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Mythology-Lover Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omygoshiz!!!!!!!!!
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SometimesFox Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
soooo good!
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
why does he call medude all the time i'm dating him
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a-human-replica Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
because its the 21th centuary dude.
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
if your calling me that call me 'dudette' at least
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a-human-replica Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
okay dudette!:D (Big Grin) I am a dummy! moonflower Pikachus nuzzles cheeks 
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
better, thanks.
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obsessivexhetalia Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
I'm choking on this fluff!!!
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roseyohrt Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Im Crying Rainbows So Much Plz Crying :heartbreak: so beautiful!!
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Orange-Flamethrower Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
I had just walked out of the locker room at my school and I tripped down the (10) metal stairs and landed on my arm and face surprising thing was I got a HUGE cut down my arm and I didn't even feel or realize it till my friend started freaking out =__=
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Ask-Kagamine Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
*Reads copyrights in description*

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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconamericaw00tplz:
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lynne9123 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i criiieed! my feeels!! but awmazing story! -blows into a tishu and cries cuz of the saddness and the happiness-
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PureOne1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
I fall down stairs all the time.
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