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"A-Alfred!" You stutter out to him trying to catch up. He turned back and smiled  "Hey _________!" he chimed excitedly.  "U-um... Well...." you spoke almost half breath. "Whats wrong?" he tilt his head. You would sigh out.

"Um Y-You forgot to wait for me when you left class." You squeaked fiddling with your lunch box. He laughed "Well I was getting hungry! So hurry up next time!" he replied in a goofy manner. You playfully punch his shoulder. The tall hero took your hand taking you to a bench to eat at. As you sat, you opened up your lunch. You look over at Alfred "U-um Alfred?" you spoke out. "Hm?" he replied as he ate some of his burger.

"I made some cake, so um... After we eat lunch can we both try it?" You asked shyly.

His mouth gaped open with a huge smile "Totally dudette! I love cake!" He howled excitedly making you giggle. He stopped and stared as you just giggled. A small blush raising from his cheeks. "So cute..." he trailed off. You stopped staring at him "Hm?" you mumbled taking a bite of your hot dog. "Haha Nothing! Just excited!" he laughed nervously.

You shrugged and kept eating. . As you both ate you noticed it was oddly quiet. Too quiet for you even. with a heavy awkward atmosphere.

"S-So... Um how is life?" You spoke out randomly. Alfred would chuckle "It's been chill, you?" he ask happily. "U-um fine" she stuttered. You fingers fumbled and some mustard spilled on your  shirt making you gasp "Oh no my shirt! Damn mustard!" you shrieked.

Alfred fell over laughing. You glared at him and smothered your sandwich on his shirt "How about that hero?" You smirked. He gasped at your surprising action and glare back. "Hey that wasn't called for!" he whined. "You laughed at me" You debated. He just sighed picking up his napkin with defeat.

He smoothly wipe the mustard from your shirt. "For a shy girl, you sure are feisty" He chuckled out in thought.

You blushed and he stopped to smile at you. The shirt was clean as it was before the mustard spilled. "There better?" he asked. You nod "I'm sorry I being immature and smothering my hot dog on your shirt" you said apologetically. He  laughed "Haha! It's ok babe! It was well deserved justice!" he laughed out heroically.

You  would take the cake out "Well let's eat some cake shall we" You spoke with a small giggle. He nod as you gave him a slice of cake "This look's delicious" he complimented. "It would be even more delicious if you ate some" you said smirking. He chuckle at your statement and ate some. His eyes glittered "Wow this is amazing!" he said very excitedly. You giggled and ate some herself.

The american stopped and looked over at you. You stare back  "A-Anything wrong?" You asked concerned. He shakes his head and put the cake down. "As much as I love this sweet cake, it will never compete with your sweetness" he said showing off a cheestastic grin and kissed your cheek. You blush of full crimson

"T-thanks Alfred" Trying to find the right words at the moment.

Alfred would come closer to you taking you hand caressing it softly. "___________?" he whispered. You blush more "Yes A-Alfred?" You replied. Alfred  would blush a bit "W-Will you be my girlfriend?" The hero stuttered a bit. Taking back at his question a smile spreads across your face.

"Of course Alfred" she said shyly. Alfred beginning to jump from excitement of your answer. He spontaneously kisses you just as the bell would ring.
Another America x Reader ! I love writing about America. I'm a huge fangirl for him xD More flufftastic work from the fluffinator! lol

I hope you all enjoy! Comments and criticism will be appreciated! (:

Hetalia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:

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MyAwesomePanda Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
this
is
not
a
joke!
carry
on
reading!
or
you
will
die,
even
if
you
only
looked
at
the
word
warning!


ONCE
THERE
WAS
A
LITTLE
GIRL
CALLED
CLARISSA,
SHE
WAS
10
YEARS
OLD
AND
SHE
LIVED
IN
A
MENTAL
HOSPITAL,
BEACUSE
SHE
KILLED
HER
MUM
AND
DAD.








SHE
GOT
SO
BAD
SHE
STARTED
TO
KILL
ALL
THE
STAFF
IN
THE
HOSPITAL
SO
THE
GOVERMENT
DECIDED
THAT
THE
BEST
IDEA
WAS
TO
GET
RID
OF
HER
SO
THEY
SET
UP
A
SPECIAL
ROOM
TO
KILL
HER,
AS
HUMANE
AS
POSSIBLE
BUT
IT
WENT
RONG
THE
MACHINE
THEY
WERE
USEING
WENT
WRONG.








AND
SHE
WAS
SAT
THERE
IN
AGONY
FOR
HOURS
UNTILL
SHE
FINALLY
DIED.








NOW
EVERY
WEEK
ON
THE
DAY
OF
HER
DEATH
SHE
RETURNS
TO THE
PERSON
THAT
READS
THIS
LETTER,
ON
A
MONDAY
NIGHT
AT
12:00
SHE
KREEPS
INTO
YOUR
ROOM
AND
KILLS
YOU,
BUT
SLOWLY
AND
PAINFULLY
SLOWLY
CUTTING
DIFFRENT
PARTS
OF
UR
BODY
THEN
WATCHES
YOU
BLEED
TO
DEATH
IF
YOU
DONT
SEND
THIS
TO
20
PEOPLE
BY
MIDNIGHT
SHELL
BE
COMEING
TO KILL
YOU!
SEND
IT
SO
SHE
HAS
ANOTHER
LOAD
OF
PEOPLE
TO
GET
AND
FORGETS
ABOUT
YOU
DONT
BELVE ME
HEY?

EXAMPLE
1:
JENNY
DIDNT BELIVE THIS AND DELETED IT WITHOUT EVEN READING THE WHOLE THING! A FEW DAYS LATER ON THE MONDAY NIGHT SHE WAS WOKEN UP BYE LOUDE FOOTSTEPS AND HEAVY BREETHING THERE WAS CLARISSA STANDING THERE WITH A HUGE KNIFE AND WELL JENNY IS HISTORY NOW
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Nerdy-Cactus-Queen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Student Writer
In many of the xshy!reader fanfictions I've read, the reader is almost NEVER fiesty. That was a nice touch, I think. Just 'cause we're shy doesn't mean we don't have some spunk! I really liked this fic ^_^
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RosiNeko21 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Student Artist
Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed So beauty... 
Kiku Honda -Japan- Answers [Hetalia Axis Power] 

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The-Pancake-Queen Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
NFHRUWYUVONRTHTNABYBYBT&

Llama Emoji-74 (My kawaii cheeks) [V4] 

Oh my god - OMG 

Wut? 

Ok

Ok

im done

Toothless 
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KiraWolf54 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ish...... soo...... KAWWAIII1!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies*
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X-ImmortalHeichou-X Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:owww-cute: 
AWWW
so kawaii
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Snowstar999 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute!!! :iconmonkeyloveplz: Thanks for making this!!!
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silliekitty Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
It's still adorable though. So fluffy I could DIE~ Heart La
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww thanks ^_^
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silliekitty Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
You're Welcome <3
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silliekitty Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Omg, I was laughing so hard when it went from hotdog to sandwich to hotdog again. My first thought was: It's a SANDDOG!!! LOL
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Student General Artist
XD But y-yeah, not my best story ^^; Well it's not well edited xD
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silliekitty Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
I liked it. It captured a lot of my OC personality. Well edited or not, it was still fun to read. :)
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neigma Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
 I wuv fwuff!Love 
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flyingbakabunny Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cheestastic. amazing
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HetaliaLover266 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DAWWWWWWWWWWW
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ILIKEFICKINGSHEEP Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
cheestastic this is totally a word
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XxAquablossomxX Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought it was a sandwich not a hot dog
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14pip14 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
cheestastic just like my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (a hallmark card could quote what my parents say)
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hip-hop-beat23 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
what a lovely fic -w-
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SpiritCatt Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Alfie and I should play the pocky game! (today is pocky day!)
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconsexyamericaplz: : Sounds like fun! -puts a pocky stick in him mouth and bends over slightly- (;

(man I haven't had pocky in years. That stuff is so good xD )
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SpiritCatt Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I have just been imformed that pocky day was yesterday! FUUUU- oh wait! You can always play the pocky game! O u O
Anyways... Where were we? Oh, right... -bites other end of pocky and starts slowly eating-
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AnohanaMenma Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
SUDDENLY, A LION COMES AND BITES THE MIDDLE!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Al:Eh.*kisses you anyway*
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SpiritCatt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OH SHIT A LIO- -is kissed-
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Rukiablue85 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
"some mustard spilled on your shirt making you gasp "Oh no my shirt! Damn mustard!"
That's why I don't like mustard... :icontruestoryplz:
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha I love mustard just a bitch to get out of clothes >.< XD
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AnnaTheWonderGirl01 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, that's cute! :aww:
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! glad you enjoyed it! (:
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AnnaTheWonderGirl01 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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kalliat Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww

The only thing is some issues with your grammar. If you want, I can beta read and edit.
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you and that sounds like a awesome idea. It would help me out a lot. xD
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kalliat Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok then!
So before you properly post the story, note it to me and I'll edit it and send it back.
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