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You sat waiting for your newly friend Alfred on the bus to go to the field trip to the beach. Mainly treading the whole field trip, but now has gotten a bit better knowing Alfred was coming too. A sandy blonde haired hyperactive man jumped onto the bus excited as he could ever be.

"WooHoo! Let's get this parteh started~!" He cheered as other students went along with him. His British friend Arthur scoffed "Alfred take a seat you loud wanker.." rolling his eyes in disgust. Alfred only stuck a small tongue at his friend taking a seat beside me.

"Yo _________! Are you totally excited! I'm so pumped! I love the beach! "Alfred ran his mouth loudly only to have him scolded by Arthur again.

You giggle a bit at their antics.

The bus began to leave, and as you were about to settle your bag between your feet, you felt daggers of glares driving into your head. You gulp taking a small glance back viewing a couple of the most popular girls in the school in jealous rage. You knew why they gave you such hateful looks. It was because Alfred and you have gotten so close. You couldn't blame them. You were the unattractive chubby nerdy geeky girl and some how managed to become friends with the hottest guy in your school.

It all started with the History project at the beginning of the year. Alfred was assigned to be your partner. From there you just clicked with him. Having very much in common, From Video Games to Anime and from Horror movies to comic books. It was like a blessing in the sky to have such a connection with such a guy.

Over the month you began developing feelings for him which made you wonder. Why him? He was loud, obnoxious, dim-witted, and immature.

Then again why was he hanging with you? You thought to yourself. You were ugly.... Fat.... Believing maybe he only pitied you all along. Which made you believe more. He would never be interested in you like you were with him. Those popular girl made a better fit then you'll ever be.

You sigh sadly grabbing your stomach slightly. Pitying yourself in disgust. Alfred turned titling his head curiously "Hey what's up _________?" Giving a slight concerning tone. Your head shot up looking at him with a tint of pink surrounding your cheeks.

"Oh Alfred.. I'm cool dude" you gave a small smile to him. He suddenly out of no where put a arm around you.

"So, Are you gonna wear a cute bathing suit for me babe~" He cooed softly into your ear.

You giggle at the whisper. Being ticklish in that area you pushing away quickly blushing outrageously more. "Alfred please! T-That tickles!" You giggled then looked away. "Besides I look terrible in a swim suit... I'm too fat.." Alfred frowned trying to pull you closer to comfort you. "Alfie~" one of the popular girls chimed. His head turned being distracted from doing anything further with you. "Oh hey dudette!" He laughed turning fully to them.

You glance at him with a frown going into thought. 'He would never love me or this ugly body....'

The bus finally arrived to the beach, Alfred was  talking to those girls the whole time giving you time to think and hopelessly daydream about a nonexistent future with the Hero that was Alfred F Jones.

The teacher guiding us through the field trip did the typical run down of the rules while at the beach. Not straying too far, no making out, no pulling bikini's off and so on.

Alfred jumped up and turned to you. "Come on _______! Come on!" He laugh pulling you up with him. "Alfred chill" You giggle. He would stopped giving a goofy grin taking your hand. "Heh sorry, I'm so excited!" he exclaimed. You rolled your eyes at his antic giving a playful punch. "Okay okay let's get off this bus. It's getting stuffy in here." You smiled. One of the popular girls smirk "Yeah let's the pig out!" She rose her voice just enough for you to hear.

You instantly frown pushing your way through off the bus. Alfred would blink seemingly haven't heard anyway. "W-Wait __________! Hold up for me~" He whined like a small child loosing his mother in a crowd pushing through as well.

"Alfred just go to the changing room.... I'll be back in a second..." you sigh bolting to the female changing room. Arthur stood beside the idiot American "Heh you're so blind you git.." He scoffed turning towards the male changing room.

After changing you over hear the popular girls chatting near your stall. "OMG Ashley~ The bikini is soooo CU-UTE~" She squeaked out all cutesy making you virtual almost vomit of how fake she sounded.  "Totally Danielle~ I'm like so hot~!" She exclaimed being very full of herself. "Like yeah~ Hey! I wonder when that pig will get done changing" Danielle smirked. Ashley shrugged. "Who cares, She'll look fat either way you look at it. Let's get out before we catch her fat." He sneered out loud enough for me to hear. You hold back tears trying not to make a sound til you made sure they left.

They ended up laughing out of the Changing room and you quickly threw on a T-shirt and hoodie. Along with a pair of sweat pants. Hiding your what you thought disgusting body from the world.

Alfred waited patiently on his beach towel looking around for any sight of you. You approached from behind giving a small shallow hello. "H-Hi Alfred..." You smiled sadly. His head turned looking at you from head to toe. His face grew disappointed. "Hey __________... You know we're at the beach right? Aren't you hot under all those clothes?" you shook your head.

"I-I'm fine..." you said sitting beside him.

He rolled his eyes at the fake sound of your tone. He knew something was troubling you, but being you. You were to stubborn to say anything.

"Whatever... Oh wanna play Frisbee?" He suggested picking up a flying disk from his bag. You smile nodding. "Sure, I'd love too"

The two of you found a nice open spot. You began to feel hot and sweat for not very much long. 'I haven't been out here for very much long? Why do I feel so hot?' you thought as he threw the Frisbee towards you. You missed terribly and huffed to fetch it. From a distance the popular girls laughed making oink noises. You roll your eyes trying your best to ignore them. After 45 straight minutes of under the harsh warm sun of playing only Frisbee. Your face was beat red and sweaty. The temperature has risen substantially. You body slowed making Alfred become more alert to your actions.

"Hey do you wanna swim now ____________?" he asked putting his hands over your shoulders. You blush "N-No..." he sighed "_________... come on dude, you're going to keel over from this heat!."He said in a more worried tone. You shook your head more.
He growled pulling the hoodie straight off of you making you gasp.

"Alfred! Stop!" You squeak, this didn't stop him. With his super strength he ripped the T-shirt you had on now reveal the top half of you one piece swim suit. You felt ten times cooler from before and gave a quick glance. His eyes were stern and determined to see you... All of you....

"The sweat pants.... Take them off..." He asked more directly. You whimper obeying him pulling the pants off. His eyes soften in relief, but you covered yourself. "Now look what you done Alfred! Now I'm all exposed and fat to the entire world!" you begin to cry. Arm surrounded you pulling you tight.

"Your beautiful..." He replied to you softly. "You always have been.."

You tear up more. "N-No I'm not... I'm fat and ugly.. I'm not perf-""No you're not!" He pulled away keeping a steady hand on you. The anger in his eyes returned to your teary (eye color) ones. "Stop it! You're are beautiful! Stop putting yourself down!" He shouted pulling you into a spontaneous kiss to the lips. His kiss was filled with anger, passion, want. You soon succumbed to the kiss. Not soon after he pulled away still keep his bright blue eyes to yours.

"You are the most awesome girl I ever met! You love Video Games, Anime, Cartoons, Comic books and so on! To top it all off, you don't treat me like a idol like most of the girls. You're incredibly nice and sweet. I love you _________. I'll love you no matter what you look like. As long as you are you. That's all that matters. I want to be your hero!" He said pulling you in a passionate hug.

The Popular girl stomp over to you pushing you away from him "How could you like a ugly girl like her! Her body is sooo ew. I mean she doesn't even have good breasts!" one of the exclaimed angerily. The other nodding in agreement.

Alfred pulled you close again and smirked "Sorry babes, I'm not into fake skinny barbie dolls. Besides _________ is so cuddly and soft. More to love "He grinned sticking his tongue out at the mean girls. The girls gasp in shock and turn walking away in disgust. They cursed at each step the took away from the two of you.

He laughed turning back to you. "So would my girlfriend like to swim with me?"

You giggle finally finding why you liked him so much. He was sincere, and nice. He was your hero.

You gave him a small peck on the cheek. "Yes, I'd love too Hero."
So this was a lot of fun to write. I'm pretty satisfied of how it turned out! I wrote this for a friend and I hope she likes it! :D

I hope you all enjoy this especially :iconanimeotakufoxchan: who wanted this as my gift to you!

Comments and criticism will be appreciated!

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maxgirl1 3 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bitch's please I may be fluffy but I got some pretty awesome boobs if I do say so myself and damn it all if I say I wasn't proud of my body for being so fluffy X3 
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:iconnicoleniveatha16:
Awwwwww THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! IT WAS SO CUTE <3 *SPASM* ALFIE 😍😍😍😍😘😘😘💛💙💜
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CheshireNeko247 Mar 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Four words.
ITS SO KAWAII ARU!!!
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Evee550 Dec 17, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconyusplz:
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:iconfaustita:
OMG i feel so emberaasiing >////^////< he ravaged my hood off and ripped off my shirt plus its cute and fluffy :3 he so determined :I lol favoring

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Pewdelia12 Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is sooooooo adorably fluffy!!
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:iconhetaliafan2060:
May i say, this reader person is just like me~ :'3 good story!
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badassgermanchick Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was so cute ^^
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NyanGirShadow Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconitssofluffyplz:
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8bit-Proxy Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well all you snobs out there at least I have real boobs
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