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You sat waiting for your newly friend Alfred on the bus to go to the field trip to the beach. Mainly treading the whole field trip, but now has gotten a bit better knowing Alfred was coming too. A sandy blonde haired hyperactive man jumped onto the bus excited as he could ever be.

"WooHoo! Let's get this parteh started~!" He cheered as other students went along with him. His British friend Arthur scoffed "Alfred take a seat you loud wanker.." rolling his eyes in disgust. Alfred only stuck a small tongue at his friend taking a seat beside me.

"Yo _________! Are you totally excited! I'm so pumped! I love the beach! "Alfred ran his mouth loudly only to have him scolded by Arthur again.

You giggle a bit at their antics.

The bus began to leave, and as you were about to settle your bag between your feet, you felt daggers of glares driving into your head. You gulp taking a small glance back viewing a couple of the most popular girls in the school in jealous rage. You knew why they gave you such hateful looks. It was because Alfred and you have gotten so close. You couldn't blame them. You were the unattractive chubby nerdy geeky girl and some how managed to become friends with the hottest guy in your school.

It all started with the History project at the beginning of the year. Alfred was assigned to be your partner. From there you just clicked with him. Having very much in common, From Video Games to Anime and from Horror movies to comic books. It was like a blessing in the sky to have such a connection with such a guy.

Over the month you began developing feelings for him which made you wonder. Why him? He was loud, obnoxious, dim-witted, and immature.

Then again why was he hanging with you? You thought to yourself. You were ugly.... Fat.... Believing maybe he only pitied you all along. Which made you believe more. He would never be interested in you like you were with him. Those popular girl made a better fit then you'll ever be.

You sigh sadly grabbing your stomach slightly. Pitying yourself in disgust. Alfred turned titling his head curiously "Hey what's up _________?" Giving a slight concerning tone. Your head shot up looking at him with a tint of pink surrounding your cheeks.

"Oh Alfred.. I'm cool dude" you gave a small smile to him. He suddenly out of no where put a arm around you.

"So, Are you gonna wear a cute bathing suit for me babe~" He cooed softly into your ear.

You giggle at the whisper. Being ticklish in that area you pushing away quickly blushing outrageously more. "Alfred please! T-That tickles!" You giggled then looked away. "Besides I look terrible in a swim suit... I'm too fat.." Alfred frowned trying to pull you closer to comfort you. "Alfie~" one of the popular girls chimed. His head turned being distracted from doing anything further with you. "Oh hey dudette!" He laughed turning fully to them.

You glance at him with a frown going into thought. 'He would never love me or this ugly body....'

The bus finally arrived to the beach, Alfred was  talking to those girls the whole time giving you time to think and hopelessly daydream about a nonexistent future with the Hero that was Alfred F Jones.

The teacher guiding us through the field trip did the typical run down of the rules while at the beach. Not straying too far, no making out, no pulling bikini's off and so on.

Alfred jumped up and turned to you. "Come on _______! Come on!" He laugh pulling you up with him. "Alfred chill" You giggle. He would stopped giving a goofy grin taking your hand. "Heh sorry, I'm so excited!" he exclaimed. You rolled your eyes at his antic giving a playful punch. "Okay okay let's get off this bus. It's getting stuffy in here." You smiled. One of the popular girls smirk "Yeah let's the pig out!" She rose her voice just enough for you to hear.

You instantly frown pushing your way through off the bus. Alfred would blink seemingly haven't heard anyway. "W-Wait __________! Hold up for me~" He whined like a small child loosing his mother in a crowd pushing through as well.

"Alfred just go to the changing room.... I'll be back in a second..." you sigh bolting to the female changing room. Arthur stood beside the idiot American "Heh you're so blind you git.." He scoffed turning towards the male changing room.

After changing you over hear the popular girls chatting near your stall. "OMG Ashley~ The bikini is soooo CU-UTE~" She squeaked out all cutesy making you virtual almost vomit of how fake she sounded.  "Totally Danielle~ I'm like so hot~!" She exclaimed being very full of herself. "Like yeah~ Hey! I wonder when that pig will get done changing" Danielle smirked. Ashley shrugged. "Who cares, She'll look fat either way you look at it. Let's get out before we catch her fat." He sneered out loud enough for me to hear. You hold back tears trying not to make a sound til you made sure they left.

They ended up laughing out of the Changing room and you quickly threw on a T-shirt and hoodie. Along with a pair of sweat pants. Hiding your what you thought disgusting body from the world.

Alfred waited patiently on his beach towel looking around for any sight of you. You approached from behind giving a small shallow hello. "H-Hi Alfred..." You smiled sadly. His head turned looking at you from head to toe. His face grew disappointed. "Hey __________... You know we're at the beach right? Aren't you hot under all those clothes?" you shook your head.

"I-I'm fine..." you said sitting beside him.

He rolled his eyes at the fake sound of your tone. He knew something was troubling you, but being you. You were to stubborn to say anything.

"Whatever... Oh wanna play Frisbee?" He suggested picking up a flying disk from his bag. You smile nodding. "Sure, I'd love too"

The two of you found a nice open spot. You began to feel hot and sweat for not very much long. 'I haven't been out here for very much long? Why do I feel so hot?' you thought as he threw the Frisbee towards you. You missed terribly and huffed to fetch it. From a distance the popular girls laughed making oink noises. You roll your eyes trying your best to ignore them. After 45 straight minutes of under the harsh warm sun of playing only Frisbee. Your face was beat red and sweaty. The temperature has risen substantially. You body slowed making Alfred become more alert to your actions.

"Hey do you wanna swim now ____________?" he asked putting his hands over your shoulders. You blush "N-No..." he sighed "_________... come on dude, you're going to keel over from this heat!."He said in a more worried tone. You shook your head more.
He growled pulling the hoodie straight off of you making you gasp.

"Alfred! Stop!" You squeak, this didn't stop him. With his super strength he ripped the T-shirt you had on now reveal the top half of you one piece swim suit. You felt ten times cooler from before and gave a quick glance. His eyes were stern and determined to see you... All of you....

"The sweat pants.... Take them off..." He asked more directly. You whimper obeying him pulling the pants off. His eyes soften in relief, but you covered yourself. "Now look what you done Alfred! Now I'm all exposed and fat to the entire world!" you begin to cry. Arm surrounded you pulling you tight.

"Your beautiful..." He replied to you softly. "You always have been.."

You tear up more. "N-No I'm not... I'm fat and ugly.. I'm not perf-""No you're not!" He pulled away keeping a steady hand on you. The anger in his eyes returned to your teary (eye color) ones. "Stop it! You're are beautiful! Stop putting yourself down!" He shouted pulling you into a spontaneous kiss to the lips. His kiss was filled with anger, passion, want. You soon succumbed to the kiss. Not soon after he pulled away still keep his bright blue eyes to yours.

"You are the most awesome girl I ever met! You love Video Games, Anime, Cartoons, Comic books and so on! To top it all off, you don't treat me like a idol like most of the girls. You're incredibly nice and sweet. I love you _________. I'll love you no matter what you look like. As long as you are you. That's all that matters. I want to be your hero!" He said pulling you in a passionate hug.

The Popular girl stomp over to you pushing you away from him "How could you like a ugly girl like her! Her body is sooo ew. I mean she doesn't even have good breasts!" one of the exclaimed angerily. The other nodding in agreement.

Alfred pulled you close again and smirked "Sorry babes, I'm not into fake skinny barbie dolls. Besides _________ is so cuddly and soft. More to love "He grinned sticking his tongue out at the mean girls. The girls gasp in shock and turn walking away in disgust. They cursed at each step the took away from the two of you.

He laughed turning back to you. "So would my girlfriend like to swim with me?"

You giggle finally finding why you liked him so much. He was sincere, and nice. He was your hero.

You gave him a small peck on the cheek. "Yes, I'd love too Hero."
So this was a lot of fun to write. I'm pretty satisfied of how it turned out! I wrote this for a friend and I hope she likes it! :D

I hope you all enjoy this especially :iconanimeotakufoxchan: who wanted this as my gift to you!

Comments and criticism will be appreciated!

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dashiepotter122 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2016
Actually, in Russia being fat meant you were very rich! :3
Popular girl: Pfft, Russia? This isn't Russia.
Uh-huh, well, it's as successful to beat someone here with a wooden spoon as it is in Russia! OwO
Popular: WHAT?!
Me: *Begins chasing girl with wooden spoon with... is that cookie dough on it.*
Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
*joins you with Mrs.Pipe *
someoneethingssssss Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Student Photographer
'I mean she doesn't even have good breasts!'




*hits with baking sheet*
Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
Oh I Cant Even XD
XxTheLoneRosexX Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LMAO Exo : Kai Laughing 
ramendangosenbei Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015
To the mean girls: 1, even if they are small, who cares? At least they are not filled with a heck ton of plastic. 2, her body is like so eeeeww, dude, do you need lessons in English? 

And I cannot swim to save my life
Bitches my breasts are a big natural C cup, better than your fake D ones.
Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
Mine is a sadly c-cup close to d
Curse my latin side me and my lil sis dont want big breast
ladywitch26 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
Mine is c-cup too and DAMN proud of it
ILikesReadingFanfics Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016
willow1qa Featured By Owner Edited Jul 15, 2015  Student Artist
honestly our boobs or breasts are probably much bigger then there's like there are a small appel size and we are like a smallish watermelon lol Jessica Nigri Boobs Pikachu-lol 
AnimeLoverR5er Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IN YOUR FACE BICHT!!!! miku (fuck youz) what the fuck are you doing :mikefuckyou: 

I love It...America (The Hero) [V2] America (Happy) [V1] 
cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
My left thumb hurts for some reason. It feels as if I pin pricked it.
Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
it might have been numbed
Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
(to the fake girls btw) 1. I'm almost 100% sure that my chest is bigger than yours. You can't beat this! 2. 'her body is so ewwwww'.......bruh, do you even English? Get yo pansy ass back to third grade. 

Florida: *chuckles* I've taught you well. Both you and Alfred. 
Me: Your the one that replaced my one piece with a bikini aren't you?
Florida: *derp face* Maybeeeee.
Me: God dammit Florida XD  
UnicornPrincess339 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015  Student Artist
preach it xd
Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
haha, with pleasure 
nightmareDLuna Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
In your face bitches Fuck you bye Doge troll emote  I'm better than you.miku (fuck youz)  fuck you bitches
hellgirl1998 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
science! Stocking's Not on a Diet Emote Dipper and Mabel- Hungry! 
Digi-tal-Cha-os Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*looks down at where my breast are supposed to be* *looks at popular girls* BITCH! I'm flat chested! Like seriously, I am a A cup... It sucks... especially with my pixie cut I am confused for a boy all the time!
cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Well luckily you won't have back pain. I actually wonder how it's like though. Besides I can't tell you how much I've thought I was supposed to be a boy but was a guy in a girls body. Numerous times I thought I was trapped in a girls body. I accepted the fact I'm a girl and will be. That is, until I can afford a sex change.
Digi-tal-Cha-os Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey same here dude, I always feel like a guy trapped in a girls body. I don't think I will get a sex change just yet. If me and my girlfriend break it off, then I will once I can afford it. I think being a male would be a lot better than the hell that women have to suffer though.
cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Yep. No more periods, no having to give birth, and no huge fear of being sexually violated because it's more likely to happen to females and might be them. Not to mention no back pain from boobs, no being treated like shit, and all in all, being insulted and judged by today's society. Also, being able to just slack on jeans, a shirt, not brush your hair, and still look handsome. We women end up having to put on lots of make up, style our hair specifically, get on a fancy outfit, and that's not even good enough! Besides, always being pressured by people to do bad things and worrying if your friends can be trusted or not..
Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
Hehe i think ill just be happy to be girl and excpecting,Not saying your idea is bad i respect it 
piplup245 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
Excuse me bitch, at these double gs arent fake. Great fluffiness btw
Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Those girls need to re-think their priorities
Picking on a girl with definitely better and more real breasts? Tsk, tsk. Go eat a sandwich.
IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Not good breasts?
*stares at boobs, raising an eyebrow*
You're saying that to the girl who had full boobs at the age of 10?
RoxasLoverForEver Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Student Artist
Cry forever Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] This story is to cute and awesome man! U make me cry man! DUDE! WHY?! DX happy cry XD Hibiya Amamiya (Cries) [V2] 
KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
...* looks at boobs* bitch i had breast cancer (i dont really, but i was close to)
Azaya-sama Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't have good breasts!? Excuse you I am an F cup, what part of that is bad!? At least my boobs aren't fake!!! //slapped for being too defensive

But ahhh Sugoi!!! It's so fluffy and 'Murica makes me feel so safe~ it's such a sweet story!
LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
no im not balling my eyes out in happiness.i wish people appreciated me.;n;
MarbleHornetsIsCool Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awwww this story is just so AWESOME!!!
gigi9930 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
things expand when they get hot  so i'm not fat, i'm just hot 

cupcakecreep2p Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm not fat I'm just... incredibly fluffy 
Queen-of-Weirdos Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   General Artist
Me too! Fluffy power XD
Nana-Frasqueri Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
That was so cuuuute 
bluemoonjojo37 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmph m-my feels dey be feeling Supernatural - Paranoid Dean(random feels spaz out) :iconmnrevilplz: :iconwhatdidijustplz: :iconmnrderpplz: :iconmnrrapeplz: :iconmnrthumbsupplz::iconohyoublushplz:  Pikachu Crying Plz LLAMAWalking llama I LOVED IT I FEEL SO MUCH BETTER TEE-HEE YOU ARE AWESOME182 : Dance Together Emoticon HUG?Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 
rockandmetal101 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
So many feels ;w;
Stories like these give me faith in humanity that not all guys like twiggy people >w<!~
I have no problem if you're skinny, quiet a few of my friends are skinny :3
But stories like these make me not so self concious :D
ppgmlpfim123 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am always self councions about my figrie but after this story i feel so much better I just want to say good story thanks
ChocolatesAndCandys Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Reader - Chan Is Just Like Me . My Classmates Always Pinch Me Or Hug Me Because Im Very Cute ._.
zevranarainai1 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
Awww, "more to love" that is simply best line ever!!!!
DarkkAngellKay Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist
OMG I CRIED!!! THE FEELS!! So happy.. And I"M NOT FAT.. Just FLUFFY lol .. and my boobs are awesome :D
Zhe7Awesome13CamCam2 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Same here gurl! XD :D
mskoolkatiful Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
holy shit da reader in this is just like meeeeeeeee!!!!!! i loved this!!!!!!! ALL HAIL DA FLUFFFFF!!!!
PurpleSmokeX Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
GaarasGirl4Everr Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
This is the best <3 
maxgirl1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bitch's please I may be fluffy but I got some pretty awesome boobs if I do say so myself and damn it all if I say I wasn't proud of my body for being so fluffy X3 
nicoleniveatha16 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
CheshireRose247 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Four words.
Evee550 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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