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(Contains: nudity and sexual themes)


You were walking around on the college campus. Many College student's either going home, to class, lunch. It was great for you to be in college. Furthering your education to become a detective. You also worked there to help support your twin brother.

In the years of studying you've met a lot of outstanding detectives as a trainee.

Smirking you felt a sudden vibe. I familiar one lurking around you. You glance to the supposedly undercover L. It was funny how you knew when he was around. It was cute of him to try to be undercover. He was very serious about his work. You learned the hard way as you once trained under him. He was a utter mess with all his sweet, logical ramblings. You were surprised how you ever managed to work so well under him. You even developed a small crush on the weird man.

You only casually walk by him and BAM. Everything went black.

Your vision blurred as you awoken from the sudden blackout. Your head pounded in distress. The feeling wasn't so quaint. The room was dark, but only one light shined bright as it hung over you. 'Where the hell am I?' you thought sitting up from the from your chair.
"Sorry for the inconvenience Ms. ____________. I just wanted to ask you a few questions." A familiar semi blunt tone spoke.

You huffed "Well isn't this peachy. Is this how you treat women on a daily basis." He chuckled softly putting a few papers down. He brought himself fully into the light. Your assumption was right. "Why should I answer questions to you L?" you spoke rolling your eyes. He frowned. "This has something to do with the Kira case-"  you scoffed as he mentioned that case. "Not this again. This is a waste of time" You began as you pull yourself at of the chair.

A quick hand grabbed you pulling you down on the table. L's empty eyes gazing into your (Eye color) ones. You blush and attempt of looking away. "Well, you don't want me to force you. Right?" He smirked.

You blush harder. What has gone over him. This was out of character. You look up at him and put on a equally mischievous smirk. "Go ahead, force me then. I answer you anything." you teased. Next thing you knew he was fully on top of you. His long black messy hair hanging over his face staring at you with a evil grin.

"Are you sure you want me too?" He asked.

His sexy smirk making you squirm in delight. "Oh yeah~" You cooed.

He went kissing up your neck tenderly. You sigh lovingly feeling your fingertip into his hair. Your small dream was going to be realized. He started suckling at your neck. A light moan escaped you. A smirk was felt against your  delicate (color) skin. He was enjoying this just was much as you did. His hands traveling up your shirt pulling it fully up. His fingers quickly snapping the bra away. You blush with surprised. He was certainly skilled in this department.

His hand massaged one of the breasts as his took the other breast to his lip. Sucking the nipple. His tongue swirled hungrily on it.

You moan out making you get more damp in the panties.

He pulled away pulling his shirt off. You observed his well toned chest. For such a skinny guy. He was sure well built.

He smirked wondering his hands down to your skirt pulling it completely off. Along with your panties revealing you wet women hood. He smiled and rubbed your clit. You breathed out a loud moan. He was moving so fast. Your mind couldn't process it. Without realizing his pants and boxers were off too. His member fully erected.

He then moved his face to yours and kissed you hard on the lips. You playfully moved your knee against his manhood. Grinding him as his made the most sexiest noise possible. It drove you mad of how sexy he was being.

You wrapped your arms around his neck lightly as you pressed your entire body against his in an attempt to be closer . Then he started to kiss down your neck, in between your breast he kept going down until his face was right above your more private area. "May I ___________?" He asked as his hands massaged your thighs . You blush with a slight nod and He smiled. He then grabbed one of you legs and started to kiss it from the toes down until he was back at your entrance.

Lightly he blew cold air into it causing you to squirm slightly "please don't tease"you pouted and he chuckled

He put his tongue into you causing you to squeal in delight as you grasped at the edges of the table. He smirk swirling his tongue inside you tasting every bit of juices you had. You moan out his name and as you did this you pulled away moving your legs, so they were draped over his shoulders, in which allowed him more entrance for his fully erect cock. Then swiftly entering himself into you.

You moaned loudly in slightly pain as your vagina got used to his size. He then to pull back and forth. He grunted a bit and you moaned delightfully.

The pressure started to build up, little by little, as you moaned L over and over again. You felt that your orgasm was going to come soon enough. So you decided to switch positions with L. Quickly you flipped him onto his back and started to ride him. His groaned out in surprise. He would stare up at you as you went crazy on him. His hand took hold of you hips helping you pump faster. His moan steadily grew more. "Ahhh! ___________~" He moan. You smirk going harder against him. "L~" you cooed back.

After a few minutes of you riding him. He stiffened releasing his seed into you. You moan loudly coming just when he did. Your back arched letting you head swing back as he fill you up.

He panted gazing at you with a smile. His arm bringing you close to his chest. You breathed looking at him with full content. "Okay you convinced me. I'll answer your questions." You grinned.

He chuckled petting your hair. "Good because this can be pretty hard work sometimes.."
A re-write of my first lemon I ever written a few years ago. -flails and face desks- I tried fixing it as best as I could. It still sucks! It would of helped if I remembered Death Note more. Please excuse me because I really don't remember Death Note much. It's been years. -sigh-

Not really much of a L fangirl anymore. He's kind of overrated... -ducks and hides from rabid fangirls- SORRY >_<

Anyways! I hope you all enjoy this!

Comment's and Criticism will be appreciated!

Death Note (c) Takeshi Obata

Story (c) :iconmslela92:

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courtneydragonballz Featured By Owner 5 hours ago  Student Writer
Good job describing it all, but I think L is a little out of character
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner 4 hours ago  Student General Artist
Yeah, I knew that as described in the description.
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ask-female-firepaw Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  New member Student Filmographer
if only you were with me when i clicked on this. I srsly never read lemons (considering im only 11 and learned about a lemon not 5 days ago) i was all like eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! wwhwhyyyyyyyy aaaammmmmm iiii dddoooiiiinnnnngggg tttthhhhiiiissss!!!!!! well everyone x3 with me luck when reading this
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow you're only 11?! O.o When I was 11 I only play/watched Pokemon, play with my barbies and watch a lot of Powerpuff Girls and Totally Spies. :meow: I got more into anime when I was 14 and discovered lemons when I was 15 and I discovered more stuff like Hentai, Yaoi, Yuri. All that jazz. XD (I'm 21 now and turning 22 in October.)

Anyway! I wish you luck and hope your first lemon experience won't a disappointment. :)
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ask-female-firepaw Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  New member Student Filmographer
ok 1. AAAAHHHH MY EYES BURNED OUT OF MY HEAD WHILE READING THISSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the story) and 2. i learned all dat anime hentai and fandoms a few months ago x3
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol and wow. xD Well not that it's a bad thing. You're going to learn about all this stuff anyway. :p

Btw I think it's best to keep your age a secret here on dA because the age requirement is 13. I'm not going to be one of those "must follow all the rules" kind of person. It's just best to keep it a secret from people that take the rules seriously, because there are people that will try and ban you for being 11.

I won't, because I don't care about the age requirements and It's not my business. Just looking out for a fellow deviant. :)
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ask-female-firepaw Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  New member Student Filmographer
ok.. O_O thx for the advise and ur an awesome person thanks for not tryin to ban me :D
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem! :)
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