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You were walking around on the college campus. Many College student's either going home, to class, lunch. It was great for you to be in college. Furthering your education to become a detective. You also worked there to help support your twin brother.

In the years of studying you've met a lot of outstanding detectives as a trainee.

Smirking you felt a sudden vibe. I familiar one lurking around you. You glance to the supposedly undercover L. It was funny how you knew when he was around. It was cute of him to try to be undercover. He was very serious about his work. You learned the hard way as you once trained under him. He was a utter mess with all his sweet, logical ramblings. You were surprised how you ever managed to work so well under him. You even developed a small crush on the weird man.

You only casually walk by him and BAM. Everything went black.

Your vision blurred as you awoken from the sudden blackout. Your head pounded in distress. The feeling wasn't so quaint. The room was dark, but only one light shined bright as it hung over you. 'Where the hell am I?' you thought sitting up from the from your chair.
"Sorry for the inconvenience Ms. ____________. I just wanted to ask you a few questions." A familiar semi blunt tone spoke.

You huffed "Well isn't this peachy. Is this how you treat women on a daily basis." He chuckled softly putting a few papers down. He brought himself fully into the light. Your assumption was right. "Why should I answer questions to you L?" you spoke rolling your eyes. He frowned. "This has something to do with the Kira case-"  you scoffed as he mentioned that case. "Not this again. This is a waste of time" You began as you pull yourself at of the chair.

A quick hand grabbed you pulling you down on the table. L's empty eyes gazing into your (Eye color) ones. You blush and attempt of looking away. "Well, you don't want me to force you. Right?" He smirked.

You blush harder. What has gone over him. This was out of character. You look up at him and put on a equally mischievous smirk. "Go ahead, force me then. I answer you anything." you teased. Next thing you knew he was fully on top of you. His long black messy hair hanging over his face staring at you with a evil grin.

"Are you sure you want me too?" He asked.

His sexy smirk making you squirm in delight. "Oh yeah~" You cooed.

He went kissing up your neck tenderly. You sigh lovingly feeling your fingertip into his hair. Your small dream was going to be realized. He started suckling at your neck. A light moan escaped you. A smirk was felt against your  delicate (color) skin. He was enjoying this just was much as you did. His hands traveling up your shirt pulling it fully up. His fingers quickly snapping the bra away. You blush with surprised. He was certainly skilled in this department.

His hand massaged one of the breasts as his took the other breast to his lip. Sucking the nipple. His tongue swirled hungrily on it.

You moan out making you get more damp in the panties.

He pulled away pulling his shirt off. You observed his well toned chest. For such a skinny guy. He was sure well built.

He smirked wondering his hands down to your skirt pulling it completely off. Along with your panties revealing you wet women hood. He smiled and rubbed your clit. You breathed out a loud moan. He was moving so fast. Your mind couldn't process it. Without realizing his pants and boxers were off too. His member fully erected.

He then moved his face to yours and kissed you hard on the lips. You playfully moved your knee against his manhood. Grinding him as his made the most sexiest noise possible. It drove you mad of how sexy he was being.

You wrapped your arms around his neck lightly as you pressed your entire body against his in an attempt to be closer . Then he started to kiss down your neck, in between your breast he kept going down until his face was right above your more private area. "May I ___________?" He asked as his hands massaged your thighs . You blush with a slight nod and He smiled. He then grabbed one of you legs and started to kiss it from the toes down until he was back at your entrance.

Lightly he blew cold air into it causing you to squirm slightly "please don't tease"you pouted and he chuckled

He put his tongue into you causing you to squeal in delight as you grasped at the edges of the table. He smirk swirling his tongue inside you tasting every bit of juices you had. You moan out his name and as you did this you pulled away moving your legs, so they were draped over his shoulders, in which allowed him more entrance for his fully erect cock. Then swiftly entering himself into you.

You moaned loudly in slightly pain as your vagina got used to his size. He then to pull back and forth. He grunted a bit and you moaned delightfully.

The pressure started to build up, little by little, as you moaned L over and over again. You felt that your orgasm was going to come soon enough. So you decided to switch positions with L. Quickly you flipped him onto his back and started to ride him. His groaned out in surprise. He would stare up at you as you went crazy on him. His hand took hold of you hips helping you pump faster. His moan steadily grew more. "Ahhh! ___________~" He moan. You smirk going harder against him. "L~" you cooed back.

After a few minutes of you riding him. He stiffened releasing his seed into you. You moan loudly coming just when he did. Your back arched letting you head swing back as he fill you up.

He panted gazing at you with a smile. His arm bringing you close to his chest. You breathed looking at him with full content. "Okay you convinced me. I'll answer your questions." You grinned.

He chuckled petting your hair. "Good because this can be pretty hard work sometimes.."
A re-write of my first lemon I ever written a few years ago. -flails and face desks- I tried fixing it as best as I could. It still sucks! It would of helped if I remembered Death Note more. Please excuse me because I really don't remember Death Note much. It's been years. -sigh-

Not really much of a L fangirl anymore. He's kind of overrated... -ducks and hides from rabid fangirls- SORRY >_<

Anyways! I hope you all enjoy this!

Comment's and Criticism will be appreciated!

Death Note (c) Takeshi Obata

Story (c) :iconmslela92:

You (c) :iconsexylplz:
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:iconmeeeee7078:
meeeee7078 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student Artist
My L fan-girl obsession never went this far but now I'm never gonna forget it! XD
Not that I'm complaining....XDL Lawlliet sorry, what? [icon commission] 
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:iconyoaigoddesslover69:
yoaigoddesslover69 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  New Deviant Student Writer
Dammnnnn!
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:iconanimeandmanga24:
Animeandmanga24 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  New Deviant
Hooooooolllllllyyy
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:iconbellaluna1993:
Bellaluna1993 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015
I wonder what he ment by 'this can be hard work sometimes'
It sounded perverted well to me it did. Lol
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:iconxxxunknownerrorxxx:
xXxUnKnOwNeRroRxXx Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Shocked Yui Hirasawa (Shocked) [V2] Seal Icon 
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Sebbyslittlekitten Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
For some reason i could not stop laughing at "get more wet in the panties" dont ask,im weird
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:iconxtremekraze:
XTREMEKRAZE Featured By Owner May 9, 2015   Artist
*finds you* wherever you hide remember I KNOW YOUR NAME!
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:iconsteinxme:
steinxme Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Student Artist
holy mother of god more please sorry, what? [icon commission] L Death Note Icon L Pocket Sprite Spinning L L Lawliet Chibi L emoticon Thinking L L Lawlliet  back off bitches he's mine and mine only
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:iconsteinxme:
steinxme Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Student Artist
fine hes ours
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:iconyoaigoddesslover69:
yoaigoddesslover69 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 18, 2015  New Deviant Student Writer
Noo! L is mine!!!!! :)
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:iconhetalia-filipinas:
Hetalia-Filipinas Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Then i will get near :) hes such a cutie!!
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:iconkkpowercutie:
kkpowercutie Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
*throws L at you* TAKE HIM
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:iconpotophan1:
potophan1 Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
HAH!! sweetheart you gotta go through me first! BRING IT ON😡😒
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:iconnakashima101:
Nakashima101 Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Heeyyyy cmon ;____;  :( (Sad) :( (Sad) Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Pikachu Crying Plz Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Miuna Crying Icon ...acctually you may deserve him more i just started getting into the fandom...
Purple Pokerface Emoticon Cry emote 
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LenaHayes Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
I just read this on wattpad.... XD
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:iconpoowdiepie:
poowdiepie Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist
i swear i just read this but this version had been improved but its the same story ...... T_T 
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MsLela92 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Student General Artist
Probably read it on my other accounts on different sites. I have this story on Wattpad (MsLela92), Quotev (MsLela92) and Here, but they're all the same. Do you perhaps remember where the other story is?? I want to make sure my story wasn't stolen...
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:iconpoowdiepie:
poowdiepie Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist
If it is the same i will take it down and write a different story, sorry for any inconveniences i may have caused
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:iconnerdycloudz:
NerdyCloudz Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omfg please make a Light lemon ;o; I'll love you forever
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:iconnova-star12:
Nova-star12 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is what I get when I tap something random
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:iconmslela92:
MsLela92 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Student General Artist
Yup
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:iconnova-star12:
Nova-star12 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
yea boy!!
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:iconlforlife17:
Lforlife17 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that was amazing plz write more
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:iconpurple-falcon:
Purple-falcon Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
SO L has done this before that sly dog I is a little upset that he did it just for info
but kudos this be beautiful
Excited Blush Anime Emoji (Blush Oh yay dance) [V6] Ai Fuyuumi (Blush) [V1] 
Mew Smilie Blush 
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haileyandpaige Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
:squee: Tight Hug I'm on fire! Mato Hugs Yomi   Tsugumi Blushing Icon Icon Gift 1/5 Finished .::AskHorrorQueenOfFear::. DO NOT LOOK DIRECTLY AT THIS Pervy Peach Yato2 i read this so many times on every  website its on and blush every  time now for many random picsTEENY TiNY ALPACA Splash Neko Emote (Smile) Dolphy the Dolphin emote Emoticon Forgetmenot Luffy OP Icon [BTS] Icon Gift 2/5 Finished .::Ask-Klover-Arrow-Ren::. Dancing Monokuma Icon Sanji OP Icon 134 27 Purple Leila Icon! :anaintensifies: mat chign icons 4 u n fronds Mirai Pout BUBBLES vroom Surprised Ghost Lewis New icon LSP Eyebrows Tsubaki Mad Icon Momoka Sparkleeye Icon lick n nom commission! no game no life jibril icon 
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downthebayougirl Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Student Artist
I started blusHing when it got to the part where he pulled the reader onto the table. A++++ in my grade book!
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Inorikilluazoldyck Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Student General Artist
wait...that was on wattpad....
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:iconmslela92:
MsLela92 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Student General Artist
This story is on Wattpad and here and quotev. All same story and author. :p
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:iconcocopeach111:
Cocopeach111 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Student Filmographer
I just fell out of my chair..oh well love causes pain owo
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:iconhaileycoslow:
haileycoslow Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
Nosebleed doesn't cover this.  My nose exploded 
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:iconhaileyandpaige:
haileyandpaige Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
oh my god ;) epic nose bleed
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:iconinsanity-kitsune:
Insanity-Kitsune Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*falls back out of my seat, nosebleed*L~
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xXRainbowSplashXx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True dat true dat
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xXRainbowSplashXx Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok FYI I've taken a quiz, and it showed that L is MY boyfriend!! MINE!!(man I sound like Kira, oh gawd. It was probably too much cake lol)
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animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
L can never eat to much sugar though
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OMGimsoboredhahaha Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
OMG *colapses from nose bleed* :nosebleed: supernosebleed emoticon 
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xXRainbowSplashXx Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg,
This is an amazing fanfic....
Good job!
( L is mine!!! ^w^)
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animelovingchika Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
heheheheheheh L is my mach ive taken tests i tell youDeath Note L: Nonono  HES MYNE BITCHES
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Ladybugg042602 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014
No I think he needs to force me again
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:icondeviantdivergence:
deviantdivergence Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
may i point out it can be deadly to blow air into the vagina i think he would probably know that l being a genius and all
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mysterydashpony Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read something on this and it did happen to be true, though I didn't doubt it I just wanted to see if it were to be true. The thing said that it was okay to gently blow air into or breath onto the vagina. Please do not take this the wrong way, I mean no rudness by this comment. Please have a great day~!
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deviantdivergence Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh, it's okay! i always accept new knowledge. *points at 'divergence' in username* one of my factions is erudite (if you aren't a divergent fan, there five factions and erudite values knowledge/intelligence)
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animefreak138 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lovely!!! Died of fangirling reading this!!
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deviantdivergence Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
eh? why?
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CancerousArcher Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You did it on the table?! Oh mah gawd, I just noticed that after reading it 3 times  Bunny Emoji-87 (Thanks) [V5] Toy Chica cheering 
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:iconmegami2013:
megami2013 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014
Please write more stories
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:iconmystinadragon:
MystinaDragon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Kyyyaaaaaaa!!!!! So sexyyyy!!!!!!
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:iconask-mmd-arianos:
Ask-MMD-Arianos Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah, he's the one to hard work~
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TattoedMaiden Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohonhonhonhonhonhonhon (BTW, your icon is ADORABLE >w<)
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Ask-MMD-Arianos Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*trying to ignore the "Francey-pants-like" sound* (Sankyuu~! I made it with "dynamite icon".)
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