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You approached the Kirkland manor as dusk was about to hit. You press the doorbell and quickly draw your hand back into your coat pocket. 'Of all days, Iggy just had to drag me out of my apartment into the cold for a movie night.' You thought grimly.

You go to press the doorbell again. "For a gentleman, he sure is keeping his company waiting." you shivered out from the cold.

A click from the door made your ears perk up in excitement. All you wanted was warmth right now. Arthur opened the door just enough for you to mindlessly tackle yourself in. The British man surprisingly dodged you barging in. "Oi you twat! You almost knocked me over!" Arthur hissed out in brief annoyance. You sigh give a short puppy eyed glance "It was cold, I was helpless. I needed warmth.." You pouted.

A small blush brushed against his cheek at your attempt of innocence.

He turned to the door hiding a small smile. "Er whatever love.." He trailed off closing the door.

"So! What movie did you want to see so badly to make me trot my butt over" you say plopping yourself on the couch. You weren't afraid to make yourself at home. You knew Arthur since forever. Forever meaning since childhood. He was accustomed to your ways by now. You even developed a small crush on him. Even though you kept reminding yourself you was very much out of his league.

He brought a bowl of popcorn out to the living room. "Thought I'd watch The Grudge" he smirk. A stroke of fear run through your bones. "E-Erm, Iggy... I like seen that a million times!!" You laugh out nervously. He just chuckle. "Scared?" he glanced of mischief. You shook you head rapidly. "N-no, Bring it on movie!" you said encouraging yourself.

Iggy chuckled and clicked play. He clicked his universal remote again to turn the lights off. "Make yourself comfy then" he smiled offering some popcorn. You reject his offer politely. "I'm on a diet.." you mutter. His fuzzy eyebrows made a questionable look.

He was about to say something but you pointed at the screen to shift the attention from you.

"M-Movie is starting" you stutter.

About hour into the movie you kept trying to keep your eyes on the scarey movie. Iggy just sat there not even interested in the film. Bored even. His eyes shift to your shivering form. A smile cracked "Cold?" he asked.

You squeak from his voice. You have been so concentrated on the movie. Mere voices made you flinch.  Arthur snickers "Oh jumpy I see, ________?".

You gulp shaking your head.

He sigh and looked back at the movie. A idea grew minutes later as he lifted his hand over the side of the couch. Knocking loudly against it, The same time The Grudge was making that horrific noise.

A loud yelp came out of you from terror. By this time Iggy was laughing uncontrollably. You growl tackling the other side of the couch he was on. Pinning him. "Iggy that wasn't cool at all!" you bellowed. Almost feeling tear peak at the corner of you eyes. The brit kept laughing "It's alright love! It was a harmless joke!" he snickered. You just kept him pinned. You were so frustrated. Arthur trying to hide another laugh from you taking the joke so seriously.

The tension was finally broken was a weird gurgle sound. Iggy gave you a strange look. "W-was that your stomach?" He ask. You jump off him, scooting to the other side of the couch. hugging yourself at of embarrassment. "Nooo" you pouted.

He grabbed the bowl of popcorn again "Eat _______...." he sighed.

You shook your head "N-No, I don't want to ruin my diet" you stutter blushing in embarrassment. He pinches the bridge of his nose. "_______, starving yourself isn't exactly the way to go on a diet" He sighed in annoyance. "You look fine to me. " he added giving a small blush.

A blush spreads against you cheeks. Looking away from his gaze. "Iggy, you're only saying that because your my friend." You spat in disbelief. You were a bigger girl. You felt very insecure about yourself. Your body would never appeal to someone like Iggy.

Arthur gave a frustrating grumble. You felt your being jerked towards him into a hug.

"_______... Stop it. You're lovely." He pouted. "I hate when you do this to yourself." He added hugging tighter. You giggle from his touch. "Iggy your embarrassing me..." You mumbled shyly.

He pulls away to look into your (color) eyes. "Well might as well make it more embarrassing at this point. Can't turn back now" He smirk. Pulling once more, but not for a hug. I tender loving kiss. You kiss him back, knowing this the chance of a life time to kiss the person you like.

Another grumble from your stomach made you separate. Arthur gave a small chuckle kissing your forehead lightly. "Want to grab something to eat love?" He smiled. You nod "Hell yeah, I'm starving." you chimed happily. He just laughed hold a hand out pulling you from the couch. "Well let's go shall we?" he bowed.

"Ladies first~" He smiled.
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Okay I thought this one started strong but has a very loose, simple, weak ending. It's just me. I tried fixing it as much as I could. So this is what i came up with.

MORE FLUFFYNESS HAHA. Hope you enjoy! Comments and criticism will be appreciated! (:

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~Creative-Island-Rose 1 day ago  New member Student General Artist
I love this! I especially like that reader-chan isn't described with the ideal body, and yet is still liked regardless. Being a little on the chubby side I can relate! (and the fact you used my ultimate Hetalia crush as the love interest >///<)
Thank you for writing this. You got yourself a fav! :clap:
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~Pepsi-bunny Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I thought this was adorable.
But that's not the reason I was commenting,
Your Icon is just the best xD
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~Alicethequietrose Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
sounds like me XDDDDDDD
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~CrumpetMuncher Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I dig this, aside from being just a bit on the pudgy side I'm still self-conscious lol.
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Love these stories!! :) Great job, loved it :3
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{ This was very adorable (b; w; )b }
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~mermaidfan Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
What I want is America loving chubby readers
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~1meh8 Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love stories like these! :) there are so many insters that say the reader has a 'perfect body'
everyone is different in their own way! :dummy: love this!
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See there should b more stories like this one cause they make bigger girls feel really special and teach a lesson 2
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*MsLela92 Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Yes I agree. It encourages girls that are bigger to think "Yeah I'm awesome!". It would be awesome to see writers (other then myself. Going to write a few more of these.) explode with more content like this. (:
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